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  Suspense Stories, Emersons Green Primary School

 

What's Behind You?
Foxes Wood

 

What's Behind You?

"I'm coming," said Amanda; her mum was rushing to go to the city centre so they could avoid the traffic.

They set off in the car, and luckily they managed to miss any traffic.  They got out and scampered off to the shops.

After lunch, they decided to take a shortcut through a gloomy and deserted lane. "Mum this is quite spooky"; Amanda shivered and spoke at the same time. "Don't be daft, it's only a path".  So they carried on walking.  Amanda still didn't approve of this idea.  Then, suddenly, she could see a shadow in the corner of her eye that wasn't hers or her mums.  "Mmum ttheres aa sshadow bbehind mme".  Amanda had Goosebumps all over.  Her mum looked behind herself to find three shadows on the ground, they both fled in terror and ran as fast as they could.  What was happening?

A few weeks had passed; the thought had faded, but not completely.  So, Amanda decided to write about it in her secret diary, but eh padlock wasn't on her book! She though that she forgot to put it on the last time she wrote in it, but there was different handwriting to hers.  it read: Don't think I'm gone in fact I can always see you, I am somewhere you will never find me.  Amanda slowly closed her diary and nearly fainted.  Everything in her room was dead silent and still.  Then she heard her phone ring, she shakily picked and answered, "I can see you, you are wearing a red jumper, black trousers, and a pair of white trainers".  The anonymous speaker was exactly right.  She hung up and trembled, falling on to her bed.  She shouted, "where are you? who are you?, come out and stop hiding"! There was no answer.  Amanda ran down the stairs and called out "Mum! Dad! Where are you?"  She ran over to the window, but the car was till there.  She lay on the couch terrified.  Who was this evil person?

After a disturbed sleep, Amanda heard mumbling and groaning coming from the basement, she dare not go, but there was a voice in her head telling her she had to.  Carefully, she tiptoed down the marble stairs, nearly falling over after every step.  "Ha! Ha! Fooled you".  it was Jeremy her no good brother.  "I played those tricks on you".  Amanda was both relieved and angry.  "But how did you know what I was wearing?" "I spied through the keyhole", Jeremy replied.  Amanda stamped up the stairs and out of the basement.  A door slammed.  It was Amanda's mum and dad.  "And exactly where have you been?"  Amanda spitted angrily.  "We went out to get some fresh air, and we also bought you a Halloween costume for tomorrow".  This was the night that Amanda was dreading ever since what happened at the City Centre.  The thoughts rushed through her head and Amanda had a headache and went up to bed.  The next day, she woke up to see her mum sitting on her bedside.  "Rise and shine", her mum said cheerfully.  She stayed in bed and, to her surprise; she woke up at 7.00 pm.  She rushed to get her Halloween costume on.  She went and called for one of her friends.  Her friend got ready and they walked through the streets.  Out of nowhere soemthing invisible picked the two up and threw them into a van.  Where were they going?  "O my God!" Amanda's friend was lying in the back looking frightened.

The two of them emerged out of the vehicle, and they dare not asked the man where they were going.  Amanda tried to stand up for herself, but did not succeed.  Both of them were dragged through a hatch to a gloomy underground chamber. "No! No!" Screamed Amanda's friend.  "My name is Maccadeba and I am from the United States Mafia".  They were both shivering and shaking, they just didn't know what to do.  "If you don't stop yapping I will kill you!"  The pair of them were completely and utterly silent.  "I understand that you ran away from our experiment, the invisible bear, well now you get to meet him, tomorrow he will rip you apart and leave you in pieces.  It will be rare for you to stay alive".  They were sent to rooms that were worse than prison cells.  There was nothing at all except a stone bed and a thin sheet.  It was 8.30 pm, and they decided to give in.

They woke up the following morning, Amanda woke up at 5.30 am.  to try and escape before the man woke up.  her friend followed her and how obvious, the guard was asleep in a chair by the rooms.  Without waking him they stole the keys, but couldn't find their way out.  They heard voices in the distance.  Someone was getting closer.  Then without any further delay, they heard someone shout two people came from the darkness and started chasing them.  After 1 hour of tumbles and action, the two were finally caught!  They were picked up by their collar and immediately brought to two big gates outside; they heard the squawk of the pearly doves in the sky.  The pair could see the sign on the gates that read "Kackerda Forest".  They were thrown into the big wood! "Please let us out!"  Amanda screamed.  Then suddenly a figure appeared, it was a big 7ft grizzly bear!  The both of them screamed at the top of their voices. The claws of the bear gave them cuts, and there was blood spurting everywhere, they lay unconscious, half dead, the noise of the ambulance was heard and they were rushed to hospital and given intensive care.  Both of them were in a coma, were they ever going to wake up?

2 years later, Amanda and her friend had still not woken up.  Amanda's dad had called a special Police Force to hunt down the crooks.  Mel's eyes (that was Amanda's friends name) had started to open.  "Are you okay?"  the Doctor asked, "I am Dr Darius".  Mel just stared at him.  "What happened?, Where am I?"  Dr Darius told Mel that she would not be able to remember a thing about it ever.  2 hours later it was unfortunate for Amanda to stay alive.  On the heart machine there was only 20 zigzags a minute.  If you looked at her it looked like she was extremely burnt, around all of her body.  Unfortunately, Amanda was very ill and she was still in a critical condition.  Then the worst had happened, Amanda was so ill that she had to be put to sleep, for good.

A couple of weeks had passed and Mel and been allowed out of Hospital.  She was watching the news and it said that the crooks responsible for Amanda's death have been captured.  Mel went to bed, the trouble over!

 


 

Foxes Wood

'Bump!' Jo fell out of bed sleepily.  She immediately listened for any more movement in the house and when there wasn't any, she peered around at the time.  it was 1.30 am.  She scrambled up, found her torch in amongst all her clothes that she had left in a heap the evening she went to bed; she got dressed and headed for the door.  Nervously, Jo crept down the stairs, dodging the creaky fourth but instead of going straight to Simon's, she went to the cupboard under the stairs and grabbed her bag.  She didn't realise it had a tiny hole in it!  She started to shove a huge bar of chocolate into her bag and then went to a drawere to get some batteries.  She put them in.  Suddenly, she heard a loud noise.  "What could that be?" muttered Jo to herself quietly.  It was the clatter of plates but Jo didn't bother to pick any of them up.  She quickly brushed her hair (because she wanted to look good) and tiptoed out the back door.  Walking, walking, faster, faster then running, Jo headed for the bumpy old road near her house.  The batteries were being thrown around in her bag when suddenly, they bounced, hit the side of the bag and fell out of the tiny hold.  Jo didn't stop running until she got to Simon's house.

It was quite obvious, when she got there, that Simon was fast asleep.  "Lazy so and so," Jo muttered.  She climbed up a tree (that was really quite high), threw a little stone at the window and whispered quite loudly, "Simon, Simon, come on, wake up!" All of a sudden Jo sensed a presence near her.  'Is someone following me?" she whispered to herself, but when she swivelled around there was only a black cat, watching her on the wall with beady green eyes.  Jo shuddered, however she carried on.  Nothing moved, but a couple of seconds later Simon's window opened.

"I'll be there in a minute," he whispered tiredly.

"Hurry up though, the last time we did anything like this you took ages to get changed!"

"Don't exaggerate!" he mumbled, quite offended but raring to go.  Soon Simon was read and they set off.  You're probably wondering where they were going.  Well, I'll tell you.  They were going to Foxes Wood.

"Have you got the project paper?" asked Simon anxiously, shovelling his feet (he was quite a serious and proud person).

"Of course I have," said Jo, rummaging around in her bag.  "At least, I think I so," she mumbled.

"O don't say you've forgotten it Jo!" whispered Simon angrily.

"Well at least I remembered to bring some paper", she said proudly.

"And I bought some plasters, drinks and biscuits," Simon replied.

There was a long pause while they were walking when suddenly; there was a loud scream.

"Jo, is that you?" shouted Simon, who'd been walking in front by about five footsteps.

"I've, I've ..." she stopped.

"What have you done, do you need help or something?

"No, I've got a scratch from a bramble!"

Simon started getting quite annoyed when he suddenly said, "I've seen that long stick before.  Are we going around in circles?"

Jo didn't want to argue so she didn't say anything.  She put her rucksack under the nearest tree and had a look around.  She could see spider webs covered in water so they looked quite creepy.  She could also see a little stream going through the trees.  There was also some very dark shade of green trees that were standing there looking quite scary.  "They look like they are going to jump up and walk," Jo laughed to Simon.  There was no reply.  "Simon!" thought Jo.  She ran everywhere; left, right, on the ground, up trees, Simon was nowhere to be seen.  "Oh great!", she mumbled.  "This is just what I need.  Where is he?" Jo started looking for him but he wasn't there.  She looked around for anything belonging to him, but she couldn't see anything.  Suddenly, she jumped five foot in the air.  She heard footsteps behind her and she ran like the wind however, when she thought she had gone far enough, she heard a shout.

"I'm done here!" someone called and there Simon was.  He was in a deep, dark place underground, filled by coal.  A mineshaft!

"Oh, Simon," Jo gasped with horror.  he was up to his ankles in coal.  "Are you alright?" she called, feeling half guilty about the whole thing.

"What does it look like?" he shouted back.  There was a short pause then Jo ran off into the dreary, gloomy wood.

"Come back shouted Simon.  "Will she come back?" he thought.

Meanwhile, Jo was running, running, panting, panting.  She saw a huge, long branch that she and Simon had seen before on their journey (although they were going round and round in circles) lying on the ground.  She grabbed it and ran.  There was no way anything was going to stop her now.  no way.  Nothing.

During this time, Simon was panicking.  He was stuck down a mineshaft, his friend had run off and he though he would never get back home.  But Simon was brave so he didn't cry.  he had confidence in Jo and knew she had gone to get help.  Deep down he was scared stiff, symbolised by his involuntary shaking and he started shaking.

"No need to shake Simon, anyone would think you'd seen a ghost!"

"Oh Jo, it's you!"

"Who d'you think it was, the bogeyman?"

The two friends were so immensely happy to be reunited at last they were determined to get themselves out of the muddle.

"I brought a long branch which should get you out," Jo whispered.

"It better do, I'm bored of just standing here!" Simon replied.

They gave it a try and did it work? What do you think? The branch was very helpful at first but then it snapped like a crocodile crunching its prey.  "THUD" Jo fell down too.  What a disaster!

"Great.  Now our parents will suspect we've gone," muttered Jo frustratedly.  There was silence for along time but suddenly they heard footsteps above their heads.  Could it be a fox?

"Why does it have to be us?" said Simon and he kicked the wall.  The rock parted and before them was a tunnel!

"My dad was telling me about how mineshafts have tunnels," Jo whispered softly "This must be one of them."

"Freedom!" Simon shouted and started crawling.

"Wait for me," Jo squeaked, still holding onto the sharp stick.

As soon as they were out someone, or something, tripped them up.

"What was that?" Simon said, quite annoyed.  Suddenly a hand started dragging them towards a bush.

"Pull," someone whispered, but Jo knew what to do. She got her stick and stabbed the hand.  Someone yelled.

"Run for your life!" Jo bellowed and she started pumping her arms as quickly as she could.  They ran and ran until they thought they'd gone far enough.  #We've left our bags behind," moaned Jo.

"Do you honestly think I'm going back to get dragged into a bush by some mad person?" Simon replied aggressively.

"No, I was just saying," Jo muttered. offended.

They carried on walking through a demure part of the wood, looking around for anything to eat or drink.  Caterpillars were munching, owls hooting and birds chirping however, Jo and Simon were getting scared.

"I think maybe we should start jogging as we're both scared stiff," Jo whispered, trying to sound almost brave.

"Yeah, alright," Simon replied.  So they set off towards the demure and eadly part of the wood.  it was freezing, as Jo was tugging hard on her coat to keep warm and as for Simon, well he was cold as well and gripping immensely hard onto his jacket too.  Bravely, the two friends carried on walking until there was a sound of shrieking laughter and ghostly music! Chains were clanking, the mustic got louder so Simon and Jo ran for their lives towards nothing in particular but interestingly managed to get out of the wood in one piece! "I think there's more than just foxes in that eerie place!" whispered Jo.  "Your right about that!" replied Simon, shovelling his feet again.

Out of nowhere, the biggest mansion they had ever seen appeared before their own eyes.  it had brown, broken window frames lying on the ground, flowers were growing as high as the trees and the whole house was a black as the blackest bat you've seen.  Speaking of bats, on the damp attic roof, as one half had been blown away, at least 17 bats were all perched neatly in a row all staring at one another.  The door was painted green with what looked like blood had been dripping down it's rough wooden texture for hours it seemed then Jo noticed a thin wire leading in through the window of the spooky mansion so she beckoned Simon to have a close up.

"Lets have an adventure!" whispered Jo, getting really excited.

"We're supposed to be doing a project on Foxes not "Following the Wire!" replied Simon, grateful that that was a great excuse.

"You're just scared!" cooed Jo, who was already making her way towards the window.

"Not." said Simon and followed on behind Jo, tiptoeing over to the window, scared in case a monster and or ghost would be lurking near by!  It was damp and cold in the mansion.  Moss was growing everywhere and the walls were covered, like the door, in BLOOD!  They followed the wire round the corners in silence.  A man in a black and white top came darting at them with dried blood on his hands.  jo was just about to run when the figure spoke.

"What are you doing kids?  Are you in the film?"

"Film?" exclaimed Simon.  "What film?"

"The Murderer's on the Loose!" the man explained.  Simon and Jo stared at the man, open mouth and eyes glowing!

"So the noises and the blood ..."

"All fake." the man replied, looking like he was about to burst out laughing.

"What is that on your hand?" Simon asked the stranger, whose face was visible against his hooded cloak.

"Well I was in the forest and someone made a thud near the bush.  My boss told me that that was my queue to grab the actor, Jonathan Parker but instead I got a stab with a stick so I yelled and the people ran away!" Jo started to shovel her feet, as she was the guilty one.

"Well if you're not in the film, why are you here?" he asked.

"We had to do a project on foxes and our friends told us this was the best wood for it"

"I would of thought you would have been with a girl," the stranger said lookinga t Jo, "and you with a boy!"

"Our teachers made the girls line up in one line and the boys another." Simon replied, "so we got put together"

"Well it's now 5.30 am so you better go home otherwise your folks will get worried won't they?"

"I suppose." said Jo, realising she had sneaked out.

"I'll show you the back door so you don't have to climb through the window shall I?" the man said pointing behind him.  As soon as they were out the door, chains started clanking and noises were screeching out the windows.  Jo and Simon sighed as they were not afraid at all so they trudged back home.

I don't think I'd like to do a project on foxes in the middle of the night, would you?

 

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